the sky trips - Published by: Failed Haiku, Retrospective Issue 40
the sky trips
on the ground ~
fog
~ by Ingrid Bruck
Is the poet or the fog tripping? I am obsessed with fog myself, because most people think of it as obscuring the view, and I just love 'the view' that it provides. So much of life is unclear and unfathomable, so why not get used to it I say! Keeping the fog from us until the last is perfect poetically. After all although the fog is the point of the poem, it has obscured everything else even the sky and the ground.
~ by Michael Rehling
http://www.haikuhut.com/FailedHaikuIssue40.pdf
Date Published: April 9, 2019